E-Portfolio Writing Term 1

E-PORTFOLIO - Writing Term One

ACHIEVEMENT OBJECTIVES:

Structure:

L2: Organise texts, using a range of structures.

Indicators:

• Uses knowledge of word and sentence order to communicate meaning when creating text.
• Organises and sequences ideas and information with some confidence.
• Begins to use a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.

L3: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures

Indicators:

• Organises written ideas into paragraphs with increasing confidence.
• Uses a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.

L4: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.

• Organise and sequences ideas and information for a particular purpose or effect;
• Uses a variety of sentences structures, beginnings, and lengths for effect.

Go through your writing and highlight examples of the following sentences.

Simple sentences - green

Compound sentences - yellow

Complex sentences - light blue

Just as I was relaxing from a foot massage a loud deep voice ran through the plane.
It was captain polar bear "up next is the shark tank, enjoy the dancing sharks!" Next minute four bears with spears surrounded the shark tank. The shark tank was rolled to the right side of me. A second later while the sharks were dancing in the tank, the plane started to get turbulence. Smash! I heard as I looked through the window.


Ah! Ah! Ah! I screamed as the shark jumped at me. Suddenly the bears with their spears stabbed the two sharks, quash the sharks were dead. The plane hit some major turbulence, it hurtled down at 300 kilometres per hour, Smack! Went the plane crashing into a random island out of nowhere. Everyone was destroyed apart from captain polar bear. He survived 3 months after that he died of starvation.


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